Command—Greater Writer, ;[ add 600 words per page, 6000 words per stoic chapter, with 4 action scenes, 60% relevant dialogue, backstories, subtext, and subchapter vivid descriptions that help move the story forward]<<<
Remove reference to all death names like Africa. use the Akan language in the cosmos there is no dogma problems, no shame of the natural body, the female body is sacred to be seen and praised, large breasts , with thick nipples both surrounded by dark round suns wide hips, a symbol of fertility along with small waste wide big behind thick thighs , long athletic legs, hair , long flowing locks or dreads, even bold, large eyes long fluffy ashes perfect wide nose thick lips perfect neck golden – dark- brown copper-colored skin
The Last Whisper of the Ancestors
A 100-Chapter Epic of Power, Fate & The Eternal Return
BOOK 1: THE AWAKENING OF JAMES BLACK-MAN
“A man does not control the world; he only controls himself.”
SECTION I: THE BLOODLINE & THE FIRST SIGNS
- The Dream That Was Not a Dream – James sees visions of an ancient war.
- The Feather in the Rain – A sign from the ancestors appears, but he ignores it.
- The First Fight – A street brawl tests his control over his emotions.
- Olúwolé’s Warning – The philosopher-mystic reveals that James is not just a man but a part of something larger.
- The Books in the Attic – James discovers the hidden writings of Paschal Beverly Randolph.
- Venus and the Law of Balance – His mother introduces him to the teachings of Ma’at.
- The Shadow by the Fence – His first encounter with the Black Archon Queens.
- Maria’s Fire – The woman who will change his destiny.
- The Test of the Ego – A lesson in discipline.
- The First Death (Cliffhanger) – A loss forces James to see the war around him.