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Here is the first 1,000-word scene of Episode 1:
📜 “The First Seduction: Dream of Maa’t”
Scene 5: Sundiata’s Dream
Tone: 🌒 A blend of mythic sensuality and erotic detail, rich with ancestral symbolism, lush language, and divine tension.
Scene 1.5 — The Dream of Her (Sundiata’s Dream)
Episode 1: “First Breath, First Sin”
POV Character: Sundiata
Setting: The Dreamspace — a divine plane between time and flesh
There were no stars at first.
Only warmth—velvet, infinite warmth—pressing around Sundiata like a womb. He floated through the dark like a thought not yet spoken. His breath came slow, steady. The silence was not empty. It was waiting.
Then he felt her.
Not footsteps, not sound—presence. Like the drumbeat of creation itself, low and echoing behind his ribs. His body stirred before his mind understood.
A shimmer rolled across the horizon of his dream, and from it stepped a woman cloaked in liquid shadow and starlight. Her skin, black like the fertile soil of the motherland after rain, gleamed with a sacred sheen. She moved like the night remembering it used to be light.
Sundiata gasped softly.
Her hair fell in long, cascading coils that touched the small of her back like a crown in motion. Her eyes—twin moons in the deep—held galaxies in them. And her lips… full, ruby-dark, pulsing with some secret he would give his breath to learn.
She was Maa’t, or so he thought.
But she was also something else. Something deeper. She did not walk to him. She arrived. Suddenly. Naturally. As though she had always lived in the chamber of his heart and only now opened the door.
“You called for me,” she said, voice low and heavy with velvet heat.
“I dreamed,” he whispered. “I didn’t know I called anything.”
She smiled—and in that smile, the universe unfolded sideways.
Without touching him, she was close. Sundiata felt her skin radiate against his. The scent of spiced amber and rain-soaked petals rose around him. He was clothed, but not. He was alone, but not. And in that dreamspace, his soul rose before his body.
She reached for him—not his hand, but his chest—laying her palm flat against his heart. The beat skipped, once. Twice. Then aligned with hers.
“You are more than flesh,” she murmured. “But tonight, you must remember flesh.”
Sundiata’s breath caught.
Her fingers traced downward, slow. Reverent. Like a scholar studying holy scripture. She touched him through his spirit, not through fabric. His sex, already hard from her mere presence, responded with a pulse of heat so raw he almost collapsed inside the dream.
She knelt before him—not in submission, but ceremony.
And then—her lips, soft and full, parted. She took him into her mouth with a grace that made the stars themselves blink. Her tongue moved in rhythm not of mortals but of tides and moons. Sundiata cried out—not in pain, but in the shattering sweetness of being known so completely.
His hands buried in her hair. His body trembled. But she never rushed.
“Do not run from the pleasure,” she whispered between slow, wet kisses along his length. “It is sacred. It is memory. It is power.”
She rose then, and he felt the loss of her mouth like a cold wind in summer. But her eyes never left his. She shed her robe, and it fell like night from her shoulders. He drank her in—
Her breasts, round and heavy, crowned with nipples dark as garnet, hardened with sacred intent. Her waist tapered like the narrow middle of a sand-glass, hips wide as horizon, thighs thick with promise. She glowed—not light, but presence. The knowing of her body was the knowing of the world before shame.
She straddled him, and time forgot itself.
Sundiata entered her slowly, as though he were not simply penetrating, but returning—to a place his soul had lived before names. Her walls gripped him, pulsing with divine rhythm, pulling him deeper, guiding him home.
Their breath became one.
Their sweat became offering.
Their movement, prayer.
She moved above him with the precision of a storm and the grace of a goddess. Her moans were thunder wrapped in honey, her hands pressing against his chest like command and blessing at once.
He gripped her hips, matching her rhythm.
Their bodies crashed like waves.
Their climax—when it came—was not a peak but an unraveling.
He came with a cry that tore the fabric of his name.
She came not once, but in waves—her body a chorus of sacred yes, yes, yes.
The dream trembled.
The sky within split open. And somewhere far beyond the dream, Lisa, in waking world, shuddered beside Maa’t—pressed against her spine, whispering awe into her skin.
Sundiata awoke, breathless, drenched in sweat.
His bed was soaked. His hands trembled.
The name rose to his lips like incense:
“Maa’t…”
But outside, in the high temple of silence, the real Maa’t stirred in confusion.
Something in her spirit had shifted.
She did not know why she felt touched, when no one had touched her.
And far beyond them both, hidden in the folds of shadow, Mawu-Lisa laughed.
Creation had begun.
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